Wow, Jason above has gone above and beyond to point out what might be one of the most critical elements of a professional website - great wording. It is definitely worth hiring an editor to go over all the content.
As for the website, you have one of the better ones I've seen. I've always enjoyed "characters/superheroes" built for hosting brands. However, I feel like the trend for those is passing and if you are to rebuilt the website, I would go more streamline, more simple kind of look.