erdnis' games

[erdnis]

Could anyone review my site? It is called erdnis' games, and is a site where you can download freeware games.

The URL is http://www.erdnis.tk

 

[Sessionmedia]

A Site review

Hey

I just looked at your site I am on a sdsl connection and it did not seem that fast to load?

I go to your site and it load's a blank white page, then a few sec later it loads the page again and this time it shows up.

Also take out the 8 where it says
"If you8 want to read more about the problems"

also check other pahges for speeling errors like on your privacy policy page.
I think you should also try to add some color or some graphics to the page it is kinda plain.

But I dont want you to feel I am ripping your site apart it looks good

 

[erdnis]

Oops... typos... fixed them now

But anyway, the loading time... That's just the first page, is it? The reason for the blank pae is the redirection service that I'm using. Sometimes it loads the index page imediately, but other times it waits a few seconds.

 

[nodehost]

I like it, it even has the feel of a game site. I like how you used the white to make your text stand out so that it is easy to read, and the drop menu's were a real nice touch....