I would edit this line out if I was you "If I were to get sponsored I would be happy to place an ad or two on the site but I dont want it to be one of those sites that is just cluster f***ed with ad's. So please take us into consideration" as if you looking for sponsor host, you will basically be under they own terms, has they giving it to you freely, and many hosts looking for these type of sites, dont care, about you. or your clan, they looking for the $$ signs, even they give you a free hosting space, they expecting the people that your site sends to them to bring the money in. So editing this line out might get you more hits from the hosts.
Just friendly Advise.