this is a redesign that i just completed for the company am working for: http://www.yourcityoffice.com/

thanks for letting me know what u think.

It looks like one of those parked page templates that you land on when the domain you're trying to access doesn't go to a "real" site. The site should pop more (using images for buttons, perhaps or a header that attracts the eye) and not look so template-like.

I agree with webfreak08. The site looks like a parked page.

I think you should change background color