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  Post #1 (permalink)   06-09-2004, 02:22 PM
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I have this idea of a series of comic strips in my head which I want to get down on paper. Thing is I can't draw. This really, really bugs me as I would like to work with these ideas of mine. Any sugestions?
 
 
 


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  Post #2 (permalink)   06-09-2004, 03:06 PM
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I have not quite worked out all the text for the comics etc but here is the manuscipt of one.

Story so far: Armed police have been called out to an armed bank robbery. Alpha-1 and Alpha-2 are on the street corner making sure they don't escape the back way.

Square 1:
Alpha-1 is looking to the right with his MP5 at the ready while Alpha-2 is looking in the direction of the reader.

The squad commander starts talking on the intercom.
"This is king-6 to all units. We are sending in a secure pay-phone"

Square 2
Alpha-2 turns to look at Alpha-1 with an astonished expresion.

Square 3
Alpha-2 "A payphone?"

Square 4
Alpha-1 still pointing his MP5 to the right replies casualy.

Alpha-1 "Budget cuts!"
 
 
 


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  Post #3 (permalink)   06-09-2004, 03:13 PM
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Part 2:

Story so far: A phone has just been thrown into the bank.

Square 1:
The reader sees a phone being throne into the building.

Square 2:
A bank robber with a mask over his head apears on the right side of the square looking at the phone.

Square 3:
The bank robber has now picked up the phone and is looking at it with an anoyed look on his face.

Square 4:
Bank Robber "Hey Jack. You got any quarters?
 
 
 


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  Post #4 (permalink)   06-09-2004, 03:16 PM
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Part 3:

Square 1:
A click sound is heard as the bank robber puts a quarter into the phone.

Square 2:
A voice comes from the phone.

Voice: This is the police. Everyone ok in there? Maybe we could come to some sort of an agrement?

Square 3:
The bank robber looks anoyed as a new voice comes in on the phone.

New Voice: To continue talking, please deposit $0.25.
 
 
 
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